Monday, September 17, 2012

Seek her not !


Sita
Is just another icon
Bestowed on the second sex
By the culture, so elite and devout!

Couldn’t it be that:
Her conflicts with herself -
The ‘Ram Ravan War’?
Ram – her designed label?
Ravan – her inner thirsts?

Did not they know -
That she abandoned the remnants of Ram
In the fire she entered
And out she came, alone and liberated.

So was it not a self chosen exile
That she led in the woods so deep
In solitude- Happy, wasn’t she then,
For once in her life?

When Mother Earth
Opened up for her,
She took with her, her mysterious self
In awe, the pious stood, and still stands..


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PS: Four of us , friends, decided to write on a common theme..
Parvanam is already out.. Suma followed ..

9 comments:

  1. The conflict of Sita between the "designed label" and her "inner thirst"! The liberated Sita out of the fire, purged from the "remnants of Ram'...beautiful construal! Some may label it as a feministic interpretation, but I would like to call it a "womanistic" one!

    Regards Pygma:) Happy to see you back:)

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    1. I just pushed off that block last night
      Wasnt so sure of the outcome
      So glad to see you again Nasnin
      Cant forget the days of 'glory', we shared
      hoping to have more of those..

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  2. Specially liked the craft in this piece... succinct but best conveyed! It's really an art:)

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  3. hmmm........ u lied me yesterday by putting dis bomb inside.....

    shall i ask one thing.........?
    which one will you choose........ the designed label or the inner thirst....?
    or will d mistry count............

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    1. It was'nt a lie at all, Nithin
      It happened after I bid gd nt to you:)
      Mystery is beautiful... so let it be!!

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  4. Hello my love....it's been so long. I miss you. ♥

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  5. രാമ - രാവണ യുദ്ധം!

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