One of those nights pained with romance, flamed by intense love..
He said: I want you
to kiss me hard on my lips, your both hands firmly holding my collars
She jerked, her heart
fluttered, pulse a bit high, tone a bit husky..
She asked: For the first time you
are asking me, its usually you who..
He : Tell me, is
there a difference if it is me or you
She: Yes, when you
kiss me, I melt in your love. When I kiss you, I pour on you my wild love and
passion
He: Let me melt ...
And she wished she had him near, to hold, to look at , to touch lips with..
......and it tasted ... Salty!
ReplyDeleteShort and simple! It's my style! Love it ....
Best way to illustrate a KISS!
Keep going!
salty haha, thankyou
Deletenice----blunt and honest expression------keep writing
ReplyDeletethanks dear
DeleteAwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :-)
ReplyDeleteThere's nothing better than a wild, passionate, hungry, melting kiss and nothing worse than not being able to get it when this close to wanting it:-)
true true
Deletebut it all the more beautiful, cos of its unreachable:-)
wowwwwww...a passionate one...nice one...hugs..:)
ReplyDeletehugs
DeleteI really liked the labels you gave to this piece..."fantasy"....it comes along with love and romance running wild and ecstatic!
ReplyDelete"Is there a difference if it is me or you?" AND "Let me melt"....his replies make this piece more melting than her wonder and longings!:)
Regards Pygma:) This is one among your intense renderings:)
again nasnin, you ve hit the core:-)
Deleteso glad, that u, like a blotting paper, takes it all in u
Thanks , love
The intensity is almost tangible..
ReplyDeletewell done.
Thank You smee, yet its most intangible :)
DeleteNice.......!! :)
ReplyDeletethanks sidhu for ur support
DeleteIntense beautiful.. short and lovely!
ReplyDelete