Monday, March 21, 2011

Twin

We met as strangers,
Soon filled the absent years.

Unwind to the core,
Yet kept a space afore.
Never fought,
Incompatibility naught.

Surprised at like notion,
Called me his twin,
And I my other twin,
At likeness  did many we grin!

With a sudden bye we vanish;
Next time to hug,  no blemish.

Innate thoughts did we share,
To lie, did not  we dare!
Brutally honest as we were..

He exclaimed:
"With no conflicts, fights,
And romance..
Can interest beheld?"
My spoilt self  reflexed:
"Mine words you spelled! "

We raised a toast to our honesty
To be strangers - our destiny?
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12 comments:

  1. പാര്‍വണം..March 21, 2011 at 10:11 AM

    Brutally honest ....
    nice lines!

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  2. pygmalionMarch 21, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    thanx paravanam for the gentle pat :)

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  3. SmeeMarch 22, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    very well written pygma...keep friends like this close, dont let them dissolve into oblivion.

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  4. pygmalionMarch 22, 2011 at 6:56 PM

    thankyou smee dear.. frndship happens.. cant make though

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  5. മാരാര്‍March 22, 2011 at 8:23 PM

    Great lines!

    Except "With no fights, conflict and romance "
    it rhymes with the last.....

    Poetry techniques will make your daggers more shining and sharp too..
    Keep writing. Keep doing it and doing it.

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  6. pygmalionMarch 22, 2011 at 9:03 PM

    Thanks a lot Marar..keep guiding
    hope u will notice a slight editing
    which helps meet ur suggestion

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  7. ബദര്‍ ദരിസ് നൂറന്‍March 23, 2011 at 2:42 AM

    With No conflicts & Fights interest cant beheld ..! ( But Romance....I doubt..!)

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  8. pygmalionMarch 23, 2011 at 11:40 AM

    true badre.. romance keeps one interested .. as long as romance lasts ;)

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  9. JuNosLovEApril 1, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    I can only say that I'm speechless to read this....it just Wow

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  10. yespeeApril 9, 2011 at 5:48 PM

    RARE BREED.

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  11. pygmalionApril 9, 2011 at 10:47 PM

    @yespee: cheers!

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  12. pygmalionApril 9, 2011 at 10:49 PM

    thanx junos

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